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Candid Candle

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Dance with yourself
Alone tonight.
In her eyes, blue burns,
From a veil of white.
There's nothing to do
But spin in the dark
Laugh till we fall
Toss and turn
Resolutions from nothing.
From a fickle fate,
She rises to blind,
She aims to win
Blows off her anger
In a flurry of madness
Like a bright cherry pie-
Dance with yourself
Alone tonight.
what can I say, I really love candles

The beginning rhymed and I just thought it sounded cool so I left it. I don't really go back and read over these things. Tomorrow this will probably suck, and I'll be like,
"WHY DID I DEVIATE THIS?"

This was really a bunch of poetic remarks on how it looks cool when the candle flame dissolves into air, and the flame is singular, like someone alone in a ballroom in a golden dress.
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